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WIP: Sex Scene Stumbling Blocks

If it were just me, writing prose would be nothing. However, add in those sex scenes and I realize that I somehow struggle.

Don’t get me wrong. I’ve read sex scenes in books. It’s the writing part that makes me blush. I’m not sure why. I think it is because it feels intrusive, and voyeur I am not.

Please, don’t fret. I will have this all figured out by the time I finish the book. I will just have to get through the sex scenes and then go back and improve them once everything else is finished. I just know that my first sex scene in my latest work really tripped me up. It didn’t in my other works, but then again, I also wrote those and rewrote those.

I suppose that is also a writing tip for you. Finish the book. Revision can come after you have fleshed it all out. Just get through that first draft.

My first draft:

His eye dilate as I nod my head. “Good girl,” he whispers, and I can’t help but let out a breathy mewl. Every time he calls me a good girl I want to please him even more.

I’ll be your good girl, your bad girl, or whatever you want with a c*ck like that. Did I say this was one night?

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